diff --git a/src/pages/about.astro b/src/pages/about.astro
index dfbf80a..cc561c1 100644
--- a/src/pages/about.astro
+++ b/src/pages/about.astro
@@ -32,9 +32,9 @@ import BaseLayout from "../layouts/BaseLayout.astro";
                     them from a distance.
                 </p>
                 <p class="desc">
-                    I run a homelab because I genuinely enjoy learning by building,
-                    breaking, fixing, and gradually improving the systems I rely on. I tend
-                    to prefer tools I can audit, services I can migrate, setups I can back
+                    I run a homelab because I enjoy learning by building, breaking,
+                    fixing, and gradually improving the systems I rely on. I tend to
+                    prefer tools I can audit, services I can migrate, setups I can back
                     up, and infrastructure I can replace without begging a platform to keep
                     my life intact.
                 </p>
@@ -119,9 +119,9 @@ import BaseLayout from "../layouts/BaseLayout.astro";
             <section class="section fade-in">
                 <h2>Why This Matters To Me</h2>
                 <p class="desc">
-                    Working with infrastructure changes how you see the internet. It makes
-                    the hidden parts visible: who owns the platform, where the data goes,
-                    what happens when the service changes, and how little control people
+                    Working with infrastructure changes how you see the internet. It reveals
+                    the parts most people never notice: who owns the platform, where the data
+                    goes, what happens when the service changes, and how little control people
                     often have over the spaces they depend on. That matters to me both
                     technically and personally.
                 </p>