diff --git a/src/content/blog/still-listed.md b/src/content/blog/still-listed.md index 165725a..d1edbf5 100644 --- a/src/content/blog/still-listed.md +++ b/src/content/blog/still-listed.md @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ draft: false I noticed the call first. -Just a missed call — nothing unusual. +Just a missed call, nothing unusual. But when I looked at the number, I saw the last three digits. And I knew. @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ Then I opened my phone. A location. His location. -And for a moment — maybe two, maybe three seconds — +And for a moment, maybe two, maybe three seconds, everything in me just… stopped. My heart skipped. @@ -132,8 +132,8 @@ Just the kind that remains. --- -Because even now — -after months of distance — +Because even now, +after months of distance, I still love him. @@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ You can have distance. You can have clarity. You can have peace. -And still — something small, unexpected — +And still, something small, unexpected, can reach into deeper layers. A place where memory lives in the body. @@ -270,7 +270,7 @@ I didn’t call. I didn’t step back in. I didn’t confuse love with access. -I cared — +I cared, and I stayed where I am. ---